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June 27, 2007
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This chapter went through some major revisions. That always happens when a new character is introduced,
as well as when I have three characters in the chapter. The last half of it is pretty much a conversation
between Wayland and Melfina, with Stark just watching. It definitely needed changing so he was somewhat
a part of the conversation even though he was completely out of his element.
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While I'm writing ahead, I'm not writing completed drafts, of everything. The major revisions needed for
this chapter took about a four hour sitting to get it how I wanted. But the further and further ahead that
I write, the more complete I'll need to write the chapters before it, because changes to content or
personality to characters will of course affect the chapters after it. Just gotta find the right balance.
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As of this this chapter, the entire story is over 25,000 words long! Let's hope for another steady stream
of 25,000 more! (That should about cover the rest of this volume the way I'm going. It should be when I get
done with Chapter XIX.)
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12/30/2008 - Rewrite to version 1.05. Mostly typos. A net change of -6
words to 1,537.
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07/09/2009 - Rewrite to version 1.15. Minor clean up. Net change of -20
words to 1,517
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