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July 7, 2007
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A little different than the other chapters. I don't expect to do too many chapters like this, but
probably every once in a while. It's good to change things up every once in a while.
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The chapter was almost twice as long before my first revision. I was going to leave a lot of it as is
and have them used as her rough drafts as well. But there's a reason that rough drafts are rough drafts.
They're rough. It's not easy reading. And with most of the chapter away it was time to trim away.
Some of it will be told later, while other parts just were unecessary.
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The document I could leave as is. Sketches aren't as bad on the eyes as reading a rough draft would have
been. Especially since this was simple (not that I'd plan to have a complex drawing knowing my ability).
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Supplying a drawing for the chapter document is fun and also a good change of pace. Plus planning to
have a drawing (or just more complex calligraphy piece that isn't just a journal entry of some kind)
forces me to get it done.
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07/09/2009 - Rewrite to version 1.02. Two typos. A net change of
0 words to 1,131.
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