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November 13, 2006
- The dream sequence wasn't in my original plan. But after I came up with the idea, I couldn't possibly
imagine this chapter succeeding without it. It was also fun to write, so it may have opened up the
possibility of more dream sequences.
- I was way behind schedule on this chapter because of working on Chapter V's Document (The Codex of
Ultimate Wisdom). I didn't really expect much out of this chapter, but it actually came out very
easily. Instead of being the shortest chapter like I thought it would be, it ended up being the
longest up to this point. Finished it in two days.
- I changed the line - "There it is," says Lord Luna as he stares at the golden tipped arrow. "But it's
not enough." He plunges his arm to its elbow in the hole left by the arrow. - to - "There it is," says
Lord Luna as he stares at the golden tipped arrow. "But it's not enough." He plunges his arm to into the
hole left by the arrow. Reaching in past his elbow, he sifts through her soul. - on December 13, 2006.
I always thought that last scentence was clunky. And I finally found an answer to that.
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