Enlightenment - Chapter X

December 27, 2007

• I'm not entirely satisfied with this chapter. The end seems to cut off quickly, and just summarizes what went on with the rest of the day. Maybe it could benefit from more examples of some of the trips to illustrate what went on, but the chapter is pretty long already. I'll have to think about it some more.
• My previous chapter also recieved 41 views at the White Stagg Inn. That's not the 100+ that I got before the 4 month hiatus, but that's still really great. That doesn't necessarily mean it's because of my story. It could just indicate the health of that forum. Either way, I'm happy I'm being read.