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Enlightenment - Chapter V



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Chapter V
Commentary

July 17, 2007

  • I'm writing somewhat ahead, but I'm still not getting "final" drafts done ahead of schedule. I need to learn to do that.
  • This chapter was much longer than I had expected. I'm not sure if it works or not. I've only just finished and haven't had some time away from it to look at it with fresher eyes. I could probably use an editor too, to get a second opinion. (Or people could leave comments if they wanted *hint hint* Was that editor comment a hint too? Yes? I don't know myself... but if anyone was interested... it wouldn't hurt to let me know.)
  • And yes. This is another Melfina chapter. This volume won't be alternating Melfina and Stark all the way through like it did pretty much with Volume 1. That's because this Volume is much longer, and Melfina tends to be the focus the story. But don't worry! Stark's coming soon! I'm sure all the Stark fans will enjoy the next chapter.

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