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July 17, 2007
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I'm writing somewhat ahead, but I'm still not getting "final" drafts done ahead of schedule. I need to
learn to do that.
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This chapter was much longer than I had expected. I'm not sure if it works or not. I've only just finished
and haven't had some time away from it to look at it with fresher eyes. I could probably use an editor too,
to get a second opinion. (Or people could leave comments if they wanted *hint hint* Was that editor comment
a hint too? Yes? I don't know myself... but if anyone was interested... it wouldn't hurt to let me know.)
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And yes. This is another Melfina chapter. This volume won't be alternating Melfina and Stark all the way
through like it did pretty much with Volume 1. That's because this Volume is much longer, and Melfina tends
to be the focus the story. But don't worry! Stark's coming soon! I'm sure all the Stark fans will enjoy
the next chapter.
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12/31/2008 - Rewrite to version 1.60. Lots of changes. A net change of
-16 words to 1,736. This chapter was terrible.
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07/09/2009 - Rewrite to version 1.80. Lots of changes. Some small, some
not so small. A net change of +43 words to 1,779.
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07/30/2009 - Rewrite to version 1.90. Only one change, but it was renaming
"Warden Supreme" to "Warden Primus". A net change of 0 words to 1,779.
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