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January 13, 2007
- A lot of paragraphs in this chapter were constantly being rewritten. Definitely one of the harder ones for
me to write, not becuase of the content, but becuase it has to convey so much emotion, the most so far out
of all the chapters.
- I also realised I need to stop capitalizing so many things. It... gets in the way. (Actually I decided
this last chapter, but I find myself doing it a little still.) So words like "Guard Captain" when they're
not spoken by a character (and sometimes if they are), were all changed to lower case.
- The biggest challenge is trying to figure out how much of a metaphor should be spelled out before it
becomes too much. I don't know if I succeeded with that.
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