Welcome to West Luna - Chapter IV

October 13, 2006

• It's a good thing I usually tend to start writing the next chapter before I finish the next one that's supposed to be published. When doing the rough draft of this one, I realized that I needed Melfina to have been hit in the chest rather than just her arm like I originally had.
• Melfina's diary entry was originally planned to be part of Chapter V. I just wasn't looking at my notes when I wrote it. Afterwards, I was done writing it, I took a look at my notes and saw that I hadn't had an idea for the Chapter IV document. It was already done, and fit perfectly, so might as well move it up a chapter.