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Welcome to West Luna - Chapter III




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September 27, 2006

  • First time I had to try writing a conversation between three people. Balancing it out so someone wasn't forgotten was pretty difficult.

  • While I did spend a lot of time thinking, outlining, and plotting, I also find that as I'm writing new terms are conatantly just popping up as write them. This time is was Stark's Final Rounds. He was always going to be dismissed from service with Luna, but I also wanted something for Stark to say that would explain a lot of the Lord of West Luna with out much being said.
  • Writing oaths, and creating ceremonies is also hard. hahah... everything seems to be hard. I can't get better without practice though!

  • 07-21-2009 - I didn't start recording my revisions until after I was into Volume 2, so I'm guessing a new default starting point for all Volume 1 chapters to be at 1.50. Rewrite to version 1.75. An embarassing amount of work needed. A net change of -28 words to 1,691.


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